JESUS PAID IT ALL  

 

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  Procrastinating as usual, 17-year-old Brian More had
  only a short time to write something for the
  Fellowship of Christian Athletes meeting.  It was his
  turn to lead the discussion.
  So he sat down and wrote. 
He showed the essay entitled "The Room"
to his mother, Beth, before he headed out the door .

"I wowed 'em," he later told his father Bruce. 
It's the best thing I ever wrote."

 
  It also was the last. 

Brian's parents had forgotten
  about the essay when a cousin found it while cleaning
  out theteenager's locker.


Brian died May 27, 1997.  He was
  driving home from a friend's house when his car
  went off the road and struck a utility pole. 

He emerged from the wreck unharmed,
but stepped down on a
 downed power line and was electrocuted.

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THE ROOM
 
By Brian Keith More
   
 
In that place between wakefulness and dreams,
I found myself in the room. 
There were no distinguishing
  features save for the one wall covered with small index card files. 

They were like the ones in
  libraries that list titles by author or subject in
  alphabetical order. 
  But these files, which stretched from floor to ceiling
  and right to left as far as the eye could see,
had very different headings.
 
  As I walked up to the wall of files,
the first to catch my attention was one that read,
"People I Have Liked,"

I opened it and began flipping through the cards. 
I quickly shut it, shocked to realize that I
  recognized the names written on each one. 
And then
  without being told, I knew exactly where I was.
  
  This lifeless room with its small files was a crude
  catalog system for my entire life. 
The actions of my
  every moment, big and small, were written in a detail
  my memory couldn't match.

  A sense of wonder and
  curiosity mixed with horror stirred within me as I
  began randomly opening files and exploring their
 content. 
Some brought joy and sweet memories, others a
  sense of shame and regret so intense that I would
  look over my shoulder to see if anyone was watching. 


  A file named "Friends" was next to one marked
"Friends I Have Betrayed." 

  The titles ranged from common,
  everyday things to the not-so-common
"Books I Have  Read," 

 "Lies I Have Told",  
"Comfort I Have Given", 
  "Jokes I Have Laughed At".


 
  Some were almost hilarious in their exactness:
 "Things I Have Yelled At My Brothers And Sisters." 
 Others I couldn't laugh at:
  "Things I Have Done In Anger",
 
"Things I Have Muttered  Under My Breath At My Parents".
 
  I never ceased to be surprised by the contents. 
Often there were many more cards than I expected.
Sometimes fewer than I had hoped.

I was overwhelmed by the sheer
  volume of the life I had lived. 
Could it be possible
  that I had time in my 17 years to write each of these
  thousands or millions of cards?
  
  But each card confirmed the truth.
  Each card was written in my own handwriting.
Each card was signed
  with
my signature.
 
  When I pulled out the file marked
"Songs I Have Listened To",
 I realized the files grew to contain their contents.
 
The cards were packed tightly, and yet after two or three yards,
I hadn't found the end of the file.

I shut it, shamed, not so much by the quality of music,
but more by the vast amount of time
 I knew that file  represented.

    When I came to the file marked
  "Lustful Thoughts",

 I felt a chill run through my  body.
I pulled the file out only an inch not willing to test its size,
and drew out a card, I shuddered at its detailed content.

 
I felt sick to think such a moment had been recorded.
 
  A feeling of humiliation and anger ran through my body.

One thought dominated my mind
"No one must ever see these cards!
No one must ever see this room!
I  have to destroy them!"

    In an insane frenzy, I yanked the file out.   
Its size didn't matter now. 
 
 I had to empty it and burn the cards.


 But as I took the file at one end and began pounding it on the floor,

 I could not dislodge a single card.

  I became desperate and pulled out a card,
only to find it as strong as steel when I  tried to tear it.


  Defeated and utterly helpless,
 I returned the file to its slot.


Leaning my forehead against the wall,
I let out a long ,self-pitying sigh.


  That was when I saw it.
  The file bore
 "People I Have  Shared The Gospel  With". 

   The handle was brighter  than those around it
 - newer, almost unused.
 
 I pulled on its handle and a small box not more than 3 inches
  long fell into my hands.

 
  I could count the cards it contained on one hand.


 And then the tears came.

I  began to weep.

 Sobs so deep that the hurt started in my stomach and shook through me.
I fell on my knees and cried.

 I cried out of shame,
from the overwhelming shame of it all.

   The rows of file shelves swirled in
  my tear-filled eyes. 
 No one must ever, ever know of  this room.
I must lock it up and hide the key.
  
  Then as I looked up through my tears,
 
I saw Him enter the room.

No, please,
not HIM.
Anyone but Jesus.
 

 I watched helplessly as He began to open the
  files and read the cards.
I couldn't bear to watch His response.
  
  The few times I looked at His face I saw such sadness
  that it tore at my heart.

 He seemed to intuitively go to the worst boxes.
 
 Why did He have to read every one?  


 Finally, He turned and looked at me
 from across the room.
 
 He looked at me with pity in His eyes.
But this was a pity that didn't anger me

   I dropped my head,
  covered my face with my hands

 and began to cry again.


  He walked over and put his arm around me.
He could have said so many things.
 
 But He didn't say a word.
  He just cried with me.
  
  Then He got up and walked back to the wall of files.
  Starting at one end of the room,
 
He took out a file, and, one by one began
to sign His name over mine on each card.
 

  "No!" I shouted, rushing to Him.
  All I  could find to say was "No, no",

 as I pulled the card  from Him.

  His name shouldn't be on  these cards.
 But  there it was, written in red so rich, so dark, so  alive.
  
  The name of  
JESUS   covered mine.  

  It was written in  blood.
  He gently took the card back.
 
 He smiled a sad  smile and began to sign the cards.


 
 I don't think I'll  ever understand how He did it so quickly,
 but the next instant it seemed I heard Him close the last file
and walked back to my side.
  He placed His hand on my shoulder and said,

"IT IS FINISHED" ! !  

"   I stood up, and He led me out of the room.
There was  no lock on the door.
  
  There were still cards to be written.......

~Source Unknown

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