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Touches

I wrote this several years ago. Took me 3 days to find the floppy it was on :) Yes I still use floppy's. Rich played with the melody but never did "hit it". Thought maybe you could take a stab at it. Wouldn't nothing make me happier than for you to finish it :)

Email from Rich
very little has been changed, a line added here, a word changed there, the structure of a line altered to my taste...it's a good song. Still working out the kinks of the music, the essence of the verses are 4/4, e/e/b/c,e/e/d/a, i'm still playing with the rest and it changes alost daily, but the verses are worded and ready to be played, i have yet to find a plucking pattern i like for it, so have a toy with it yourself, and tell me what you think. It's a work of love this song, I thank you for sharing it with me.

TOUCHES ME TOUCHES YOU

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CHORUS
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Out across space
I'm sending to you
my deepest emotions
please hold them with care
you touching me and me touching you
forever and ever
I know that we'll be

VERSES

1-------

I stretched and awoke
my first thought of you
wasn't logical
and I'll never know why

you've reached out and touched me
I can't even explain
but somehow I know
I'm forever changed

2-------

This love that I feel
is ever consuming
It rules ore my mind
Looking inside i find

I'm wantin to hold you
to reach out and touch
and know in my heart
forever I'll love you

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INTERLUDE-
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There's so much more
I wish I could say
but no words could match
what I'm feeling today
I'm hoping this tells you
how much I do love you

3------

The thoughts that I'm thinking
have no reason nor rhyme
this song in my breast
just aches to be sung

Ther's a pain in my heart
and you hold that part
but the words to describe it
not reaching my grasp

4------

I can't help but think
and I know in my heart
that always and ever
changed are our lives

Take me and hold me
please nae'er let me go
your strong arms about me
my heart aching so

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FINAL----

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If ever I see you
If nae'er we meet
out across space
we'll live forever
me touching you and you touching me
I'll treasure forever
this song in my heart
always and ever
out across space
you touching me and me touching you
loving forever
I know that we'll be

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